RWBY- Charcoal- WIP (Update)

This is a fan art I've been thinking about for a while. Details have been nagging at me for proportions and angle, but I've got the basic idea down. Now all I have to do is do some touch-ups, color, add background, and I'm good to go!

Oh, and this character is NOT MINE, at all. This is by the amazing animator Mark Zhang, famous for his RWBY Fan-made Trailers. I suggest you check them out if you haven't already.
Link to his first video down below.

Watch order of the trailers from oldest to newest is;
Charcoal
Silver
Viridian
Linen

Charcoal trailer here www.youtube.com/watch?v=jOu3jd…

Edit: I thought I might as well try to put up something a bit more... done. Far from being finished, (so very far ;- but I think it's better than a red outline on a white back drop. It's coming along okay, and I think I'll have this sucker done at least by the end of next week. No promises though.